Monday, June 14, 2010

Close to done.........but don't know if I'll get a chance to finish this

Gorgeous..............W.I.P. from Brandon Beckstead on Vimeo.


At 8:12 AM, Blogger Mathew Rees said...

Very funny shot Brandon! I only have a few comments but these are nit picking to say the least.

When he first notices her chest and his cheeks puffed out I thought it was because he was going to throw up, for me personally I'd maybe just have his mouth gape open in total awe.

Finally, I don't know if he should look away at about 14 seconds. It may be funnier if he's just transfixed and stares at them throughout this section until he snaps out of it after she asks him the question at 17 seconds.

This is all down to taste though fella because its already very funny, especially his pose on "mammals". Quality!

Good work!

At 5:03 PM, Blogger R.Dress said...

Haha:) Breast of Luck!


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